Reimagining the World
An interview with Michigan author Paul A. Toth
by Steven Gillis

For the last several years Michigan’s Paul Toth has done our state proud.  A wonderfully clever writer, with a keen, unflinching eye, Toth has published numerous short stories, was nominated for the Pushcart Prize and a Best American Mystery Story, and this July will release his second novel, Fishnet, from Bleak House Books  (Paul’s critically acclaimed first novel, Fizz, was published in 2003, also by Bleak House.) Fishnet is a mystical tale of love and longing set in the fictional city of Mercy, California, where protagonist Maurice Melnick, hoping to recapture his wife’s affection—and recall the reason he first fell in love with her—sets out to paint her smile as he remembers it from some 20 years ago. The process only leads to further complications and revelations in Toth’s ingeniously constructed novel. 
 
Ann Arbor Paper: Let’s start with your most recent project, Fishnet. The construct of the narrative is a perfect progression from Fizz, a bit more post-modern yet clearly Toth-esque. Why don’t you tell us a bit about how you got into the novel, where the voice and idea for the book came from.
Paul Toth: After Fizz, I knew I wasn’t finished with the identity issue, the idea that the self is a watery world that one can never grasp. In fact, I’m not sure I’ll ever be finished with that theme, or it with me. Anyway, at some point, I locked onto the image of a woman’s smile at the exact moment before its transition from the middle to later years. It could just as easily have been a man’s smile, except I find a particular beauty in a woman’s smile when it reaches that point. Let me provide two famous examples: Patricia Heaton and Lorraine Bracco. They both possess this smile. 


I then imagined a man married to such a woman. He realizes the smile’s significance: time is moving fast. Adding to his dilemma, he swims low in his imagination, avoiding life’s most difficult moments. His instinct is to continue swimming low, but he knows his marriage is getting away from him. So does his wife. Their younger selves tug their sleeves: “Hey, remember me?  You forgot I existed, but I’m still here, and I’m not too thrilled at the moment.” Meanwhile, the town in which they live is on the ghost march, too. Fishnet is a folktale for adults. It’s short and, if read before sleep, will induce pleasant dreams.
 
A2P:
Give us a sense of what your wife thinks of the book, insofar as the wife in Fishnet drives the story in many ways.
PT: Actually, it’s her favorite of my books. Luckily, I aimed the autobiographical potshots at myself; I tend to swim low. The only similarities between the Sheila of Fishnet and my wife Kathryn are pointed reminders that something called life exists and cannot always be edited, revised or reimagined. Still, I think we must try to edit, revise and reimagine life. Otherwise, I’m not sure it’s worth living. Kathy brings me back to earth, and hopefully I occasionally take her for a spin in the UFO.
   
A2P:
You are a writer who composes in many genres—mystery, literary fiction, fantasy.  Does the genre come first or do you come up with an idea and then see which genre works best?
PT:
I like to mix genres. It’s nothing new to say, but I think of myself as a collagist, and so I beg, borrow and steal, as necessary. Some stories end up in almost pure genre form, most often a crime tale. Far and away, however, stories end up somewhere in between, which can make life difficult. That is, the lit crowd smells genre, the genre crowd smells lit, and both lose their appetite. I’m looking for those with adventurous taste buds. I really don’t see the point in repeating recipes, unless you’re the Nabokov of cooks.
 
A2P:
You are one of those serious writers who tapped in early on to on-line journals where you’ve published a good deal. Can you speak a little about on-line journals, their strengths and stigmas and what role you see them playing in today’s market.
PT: I find some of the best writing online. The better online journals—and, of course, many should be avoided—are as discriminating in the positive sense as prestigious print outlets, yet remain more open to new voices. Incest in publishing is unavoidable; we’ve all been on the Jerry Springer Show, you might say. But the incest seems less rampant online. On the other hand, with a few exceptions, the best of the literary journals still give more of a career boost. On my third hand, I really wouldn’t know; they seem to not only turn up but throw their noses at me. I’ve got a collection of noses, if you need one.
 
A2P: Your writing, regardless of which genre you are in, reveals—at least to me—flashes of Italo Calvino with a mix of early T.C. Boyle. Who are some of your influences and who are you reading now?
PT: Last thing I read was DeLillo’s White Noise. A little late, I realize, but my reading is all over the place. Calvino is certainly in the mix of influences, along with J.G. Ballard, Stanley Elkin. I usually fall for an original voice and a new vision, something that allows me to go back to the world with a different perspective. In other words, writing that reflects the world rather than reimagines it tends to bore me. If you can reflect the world and reimagine it, well, then, you’ll hear me saying your name all the time. Here’s one: Stephen Wright. Not the comedian.
 
A2P: I know you are quite prolific. As I understand you write some 20 stories and a novel a year—a mind-boggling amount to me—how do you do it?
PT: Well, I’ve slowed, and, I’m sure, wisely so. I felt pushed to make up for lost time, but then I realized one can lose time by rushing unfinished parts off the assembly line. There’s a Flint, Michigan, reference for you. I tend to write about 500 words a day, sometimes more, rarely less, especially while working on a novel. I also used to write stories while at work on a novel, but that’s fallen off a bit. A result of age. I still have energy, but I have to direct it in one direction. These days, I can’t splatter like Jackson Pollack. Sometimes more paint sticks if you throw less.


A2P: Kafka, or so they say, was loathe to rewriting. When you finish a piece, do you simply move on to the next or are you ever drawn back in order to reconstruct a story?
PT: Fishnet went through more revisions than I care to remember. Fizz was fast because it was mainly a matter of getting into Ray’s character. Once I had his voice down, I  just went with it, though there was still extensive editing in getting that voice to the right cartoon pitch. Sometimes the stories flow, sometimes not. I’m revising more these days, but I’ve never gone the Kerouac route. I might use an “automatic writing” technique to get going on a particularly cold day, but that all gets deleted once I find a direction out of the scribble. I’m too much of a control freak to get that Zen about writing.
 
A2P: Since this issue of the Ann Arbor Paper focuses on Michigan, why don’t you tell us a bit about how being from Michigan affects your writing.
PT: I would say, especially being from Flint, that I’ve always had a class consciousness, not necessarily in a polemical way, but just the odd confrontations between different viewpoints. I find a lot of humor in those juxtaposed viewpoints, their utter incongruity, and that certainly stems from growing up in Flint. Here’s one example. I once worked a day in a screw factory (that’s about all they could stand of me), and a woman told me, “You’ll learn more here than you will in four years of college.” Well, she had a point, one I learned when the foreman showed up with a bucket of my useless screws. Also, northern Michigan, seen on family trips or less-innocent treks with friends, played into my love for rivers. Many of my favorite novels involve rivers. There’s something about a river; obviously, it’s nothing unique to me, but something that I’m sure was amplified by growing up in this state.
 
A2P: Tell us a bit as well about growing up in Michigan, what city you’re from and how you wound up where you are now.
PT: As mentioned, I grew up in Flint, on the north end. When I was young, that was Leave it to Beaver territory, but then came white flight, and we were amongst the last to leave. This, no doubt, plays into some of the racial elements of Fizz and many of my stories. My family ended up in a suburb on the other side of town, now undergoing the same transition. In my twenties, I moved to Los Angeles, then later to D.C. and Denver. I returned to Flint by mistake, actually, after finding out New York cost a bit more to inhabit than I had in my pocket. I met my wife, got down to working—for want of anything better to do—and came to tolerate if not love life in Flint. Don’t get me wrong; some great people live here, and they’re always trying. But the pull of economic transformation is, I’m afraid, stronger than the will of those left behind by it. It’s a story you can see all over America. Later, when one third-world nation’s labor force is abandoned for another’s cheaper labor force, I suppose we’ll see it keep moving. And white flight won’t end until the penguins have been chased off the Arctic even as all the air conditioning brings the temperature back down to penguin standards.
 
A2P: Fizz was set in the Midwest while Fishnet could not be further removed. Was this a conscious decision or did you simply accommodate what the story required?
PT: A bit of both. The city in Fizz wasn’t directly based on Flint, but I did have a run-down industrial town in mind. I imagined the kind of place in which a graphic comic artist would plop the world’s most forgotten boy. I suppose Fishnet moved to California because I have good memories of the place, hazy with sunlight, things like riots and incredibly botched relationships filtered out. I went back there, in my mind, and swam, this time with a boy who had forgotten the world.
 
A2P: Give us some insight into your routine as a writer.
PT: Typically, I wake up, slam Diet Coke and coffee, read the headlines, catch up on e-mail, and then, when the fuzz clears, get to work on the next passage. I usually write until I have a faint but not complete idea of what will come next, and then stop. I may type some notes about the next day’s work or developments farther down the line. I then go back and edit the current chapter, back and forth, every day, until that chapter is nearly complete. Then I try to decide if everything is in place, or if perhaps that chapter needs to be moved up or back, or preceded or proceeded by something I hadn’t planned. Then I reread the day’s passage. That’s it, except any ideas that occur throughout the rest of the day are planted on my beloved index cards, consulted as necessary. I’m also in school, so the remainder of my time is divided between reading and a few freelance activities. The current novel, I should mention, is part of my study. Barring readings and that kind of thing, my schedule is reasonable, though it will eventually give way to certain realities.
 
A2P: Knowing as we do that few of us are able to make a dollar writing, what do you do to pay the rent?
PT: L-O-A-N-S. School was in part, but only in part, a way to finance a few more years of complete devotion to writing. When this process is complete, and I’m again employed, I’m sure the word “gainfully” will only apply to the banks now providing those loans.
 
A2P: I know you have an interest in film.  Any thoughts to ever turn one of your stories or novels into a movie?
PT: I’m certainly open to the idea..  I’ve toyed with screenplays, but I would have to be approached first, having learned enough about the odds. The spec screenplay is beyond my capacity for hopefulness. I do occasionally write short scripts, and a couple have been made into films, one based on the first chapter of Fizz, the other on a short story. That’s a labor of love, and the labor is so much briefer than the term of a full-length film that I can bear it without charging whatever a surrogate mother gets these days.
 
A2P:
You are working now on a third novel. Without giving away more than you are comfortable discussing, will this novel also be published by Bleak House and why don’t you tell us about Bleak House and how your relationship came about.
PT: The third novel is done, except for minor revisions. It features yet another one-word title, so I will keep that to myself, hoping no one else gets to it first. The deal isn’t sealed yet, since Fishnet hasn’t hit the market yet. However, the third one will be a kind of noir parody, with blood and sweat involved; that is, the reader will laugh along the way, but there’s a hard punch coming. 
As far as Bleak House, that was a chance submission, and a lucky one. They loved Fizz, got what I was doing, and have offered a level of commitment surpassing anything I could have expected. Since the Fizz days, they’ve built the company, and it continues to expand, as has my personal relationship with the staff. There’s a lot in the works, and plenty of room for hope in what everybody calls a tough publishing climate. Sure, I hope for the big paycheck one of these days, for knocks on the door from strangers with fascinatingly modern eyeglasses, but if that day never comes, I’ll still say I was lucky.


The release party for Fishnet is on Thursday, July 28. at 7:00 p.m. at Shaman Drum Bookshop, 311-315 S. State Street, Ann Arbor. 662-7407. shamandrum.com.
 
Steven Gillis is the author of the novels Walter Falls and The Weight of Nothing and the founder of 826 Michigan, a nonprofit reading and writing program for students 1-12 grade located on 2245 S. State Street.  www.826michigan.org

 

 


The Michigan Issue

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